Thursday, May 1, 2008
Weird Random Writing About The Ocen :)
The warm sand slips between my toes as I move swiftley across the beach. The waves crash softley along the shore, pure and blue. As thy move, they take the slick nad slimy seaweed with them. The sun casts a greenish glow across the center of the sea. As I splash my feet into the ice cold, crispy clear water I realize I am standing in the exact same waterthat is rippiling along the shores of somewhere else far away, maybe even another country or continent. The beach is very beautiful, it always will be too.
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Yay! This sounds fun! I love the beach too! THis sounds so fun! I lovew this because it's some honest thoughts.
i liked this post because it has a lot of detail. I love to swim in the ocean even though its cold O.o
I love this ocean. Even though it's cold. I like this because you're very open minded about the ocean. You make me think. (=
i love swimming. that really sounded fun becasue a day at the beach is fun. i liked this becasue there is some honest thoughts. i think its fun to swim even if the water is very very very very very cold.
This post was really good. I like t becuse I feel the same way about the ocean. i think that you could try to work on your spelling. I have a question too. Is this a type of poem??? I cant wait until summer when it is actually warm enough to go to the beach!
I liked your blog entry because it was really descriptive. Im pretty sure you spelt ocean wrong unless you wanted it that way, it's your writing. I don't know. I was also wondering is this a poem or just writing. I just realized that I always comment on your blog. I like your writing though. They are very detailed.
This is absoulutly great writing. I love this because your words spoke so pure and beautifuly. This is some of your best writing and i love what you said about how beautiful the water is and that green glow you always see sweaping across the water. I hope you keep writing. Great job.
This is absoulutly great writing. I love this because your words spoke so pure and beautifuly. This is some of your best writing and i love what you said about how beautiful the water is and that green glow you always see sweaping across the water. I hope you keep writing. Great job.
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