Thursday, March 20, 2008
Untitled Story -2
"UGGG...YES MOM! I'll change your awful bathroom machine!" replied Sacoyia sarcasticley. "Ewwww Aaron! I think your doing this on purpose JUST to torcher me!" "Gogosdjvnjzsnbjndb..." little Aaron mumbled. "Geez! Iwas HOPING to have a little fun and romance this summer, but I guess that's posponed since I'm on baby duty! HMPH!" I unpatientley complained. After an unpleasent morning of baby changing, Ifinally got my escape phone call from my best friend Minnie. "Hey girlie girl! Get your butt over here to the mall right now! Cute guy group, and there here all DAY! AHHHHH!!!!" The line goes dead. "Thank GOD!" I said to myself. A quick freshen up was all the time I had to get readyand attractive looking! "Oh em gee WHAT amIgoing to DO!?!?"
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4 comments:
Wow izzy this looks great! I like it because it sounds like something that I could see happening to YOU!!! I like the characters and I think they are just perfect for this story. I wonder though if you are going to do more??? I sure do hope so!!! I tgink that would be great. Keep running with this story line!
This was a very um....strange story. Well I think its a story. I liked it because it was funny when the baby started talking and you had no clue what he was saying. I also don't think we live my a mall so thats another reason why I think its a story. Write more of this story it's funny.
Wow does this ever sound like you! Your writing is getting better! Keep going! I can't wait to read what's coming next! I like this because it really does sound like you!
THis is a cool entry i like it because it sounds like you. i liked the voice and detail. keep writing. i also like the part when you said oh em gee.
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