Wednesday, February 6, 2008
Haha, this is a poem of a FLOWER GARDEN! =D
The bees buzzed in merry glee circeling around my head. The cobelstone steps thrust into the darnk soil as I stepped upon them looking arlound in awe. I am in the flower garden. Red, res roses bloom all around me with petals so soft. Fusihas glissed with morning dew which showed off there exotic exterior. The tulips bring out the happiness in me with there soft, pastel colors. I love it here. It starts to rain silentley and all the plants seem to open and show there centers as if ready to grow. Birds shake and russel there feathers as they land in there waiting nests to settle for the night. Everything is queit nad peaceful. As I head back inside, I look back at my beloved flower garden and promise I will be back soon. The nest day, everything is the same and how it should be. Everything is in perfect harmoney again.
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9 comments:
I like this because you were very descriptive with EVERYTHING!
nice. i like because its descriptive.
i liked this post because it was veary discriptive
i liked this because of the way you described everything.
I like this entry because you really capture the sights of being in a flower garden. Althouhg i'd say you need to work on your spelling. sorry if that offends you. Nice work! Keep it up!!!
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I like this entry because its very decriptive of the way you feel in the flower garden. Is the flower garden a reall place or did you make it up. You sound like you enjoy it there if its real. I like flowers, tulips are my favorite flowers. I like roses to. I have roses in my yard. You described both of those in your poem. You are a good poem writer.
My beautiful Cabbage Flower, you are great at writing. You're very discriptive with every thing. It is wonderful.
This story really paints a picture in my head of this "flower garden." It is great because you used a lot of descriptive words. I also like how you told how each flower made you feel. I this a real place? I want to go!
I like this post because it really reminds me of spring. It makes me have a happy feeling inside. I like how you included the bees and flowers. I think all in all it got me thinking of spring again.
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