The cool breeze nipped at me like a small dog would at your ankles. The air smelled fresh and crispy as it passes through me. The trees swayed slightly as ifdancing in the wind . I am in the forest. Bushes with berries and braches circled me. As I walk I come across a calm peacful pond. The water is as clear as the raindrops that fall from the sky making everything grow and become healthy and full of life. The clutered duck-weed that sits atop this pool is as green and bright as the grass in paradise. This is my haven. This is my backyard. The details of this beauty are far more extravigent thn I can describe. It's so amazing, you have no idea.
Mkay thanks! That's my very descriptive description of my back yard =P
14 comments:
hey i like this entry cause its very very descriptive
Wow I love this entry because you make everything sound so beautiful!
I like your blog entry because its very discriptive and I like your backyard. I wish my backyard was like that. My just has grass and some trees.
Wow....
I really like this entry because it's very descriptive. I can really imagin myself standing there with you.
AWESOME!!!!!!
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i liked this because of the way you decribed everything. good job.
Izzy, I like this paragraph because it is so descriptive. It's like I am looking at it right now.
i liked it because of the way you discribed how the wind nipped you like a small dog
i like this blog because its very discriptive
i liked this becuse it makes me want to gop outside.
uhhh oops, go not gop. sorry!
Your backyard sounds beautiful, Izzy. Someday I would like to visit your house. :); I love this bcasue of your disctription.
dude, this is as corny as Mr. B's lines..... lol. I liked it cuz it was funny and corny and awesome... kinda like something you read in a lame romnce novel. lol. I love, you izzy. Peace!
:D Emily
ps kelsey said the mr. b thing first, so i coppied her... btw
wow izzy thats really deep i didn't no that your backyard really felt like that. thats great i love this but it's almost as cheesy as mr. Bs lectures love you though. BTW. emily copied me on the comment. i didn't no you could write like that because you don't show it. good job
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