Wednesday, October 17, 2007

My Dancing Poem. (haha, its SO bad =P)

Dance.

When I was one, I injurd my thumb, guess what I was doing, I was dancing!

When I was two, I got covered in glue, what was I doing? I was dancing.

When I was three, I was stung by a bee, now what was I doing? I was dancing!

When I was four I ran into a door, I was dancing.

When I was five, I got the stink eye, guess what I was doing, I was dancing!

I love to dance and prance.

It puts we in a trance, when I dance.

By; Izzy

9 comments:

Tayy said...

duuude i like to dance tooo!!!!
and it aint bad!!
u wouldnt have posted it if it was baaaad!!!!

Anonymous said...

omg! thats so cool!

KeLseY said...

It's awesome bacause you wrote about something you really love.

Patrick said...

i loved it ( NOT REALLY ) jk i lked it because you wrote something that didnt rime!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Alexis said...
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Alexis said...

Hey Izzy,

I thought you poem was good because it was funny and it rhymed!

Alexis

Miranda said...

haha. funny.
i helped you with this.!
i liked this poem a lot because i am a dancer also.

raelani said...

I liked this poem becuase it was pretty funny, and really creative.

kelsey k said...

I think you did a great job on this poem you showed how even though you always get hurt that could because your a clutz jk but you are doing something you love.